📚 Nobody cares about your "brand story"


Hi Reader!

I just came from a networking event and someone mentioned they were working with a coach on their "story." I was like, "uh oh."
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Then she said, "I want to serve anyone" and "it really doesn't matter what their business is."
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😳

At the end of our chat, I asked her how I could help her and she said, "I'm offering a group program in the fall so if you hear of anyone who needs my help, send them to me."
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But I can't because I don't know who's the right audience for her.
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It all starts with your core message

If I go to your website and the language is vague and broad, I can't tell if I'm a good fit or if anyone I know could use your help (no referrals possible).

If I'm reading your LinkedIn profile and your whole description talks about your story, your passion, why you do this work, and you never tell me what you do, I won't invite you to be on my podcast.

If I see your social media posts and the topics are all over the place, I can't "see" what the deal is because the topics are disconnected threads, I can't tell what makes you an expert.

Your words communicate your value

Here's a quick way to test whether your words clearly tell people what you do and how you can help them: Ask five people to go to your home page and tell you what you do based on what they see.
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If you don't like the answer they gave you, I can help you stop telling a long-ass brand story and find one sentence that communicates the only thing people care about: How you can help them solve their problem.

Maggy Sterner Brand Message Strategist

Can people understand you when you answer the question, "What do you do?". I teach people how to describe what they do in ONE short sentence so they're understood, referred, and hired.

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